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Takim Williams's avatar

I was literally just talking to my wife about how there's no solution to tab management... about to get Arc!

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Renee Fountain's avatar

Noor, I think the haircut looks great. I'd shave my head if I thought it would look good.

As for your book - if Lisa Cron is a help for you, then great. But, have you had anybody else read it? Maybe an honest friend who reads a lot to get the every day POV of how they feel about the section or the character that you're having an issue with, or a professional who might be able to give you guidance? I don't say this suggesting you're ready for a DE, I'm saying this because you might not be able to see the forest for the trees anymore. Your brain knows the story and fills in any gaps - and skips over the parts it's sick to death of looking at, so it might be difficult to find the fix yourself.

Maybe it's anchoring interiority with sensory details. Maybe it's showing/deepending the conflict between what your character wants with what they actually need. It's possible with some time and maybe a bit of space away from it, you'll be able to figure it out.

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